CRAFT: I was told at the critique that I needed to changed the text on the article because it was hard to read so I did. I aslo changed the picture that was in the circle because it didn't match up with the large photo on the first page. I didnt hav much text so my photos can do most of the talking.Composition: The arrangement of the layout was simple and I wanted to draw attention to the photos instead of the text. So i had larger photos. The text is boring compared to the illustrations.
Concept: My overall concept was to have a large photo take up one page and a photo and text on the other page. So that the balance can lean more towards the photos.
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